Author: J.C.

Swipe by Evan Angler

Swipe by Evan Angler

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Title: Swipe (Swipe, #1)

Author: Evan Angler

Published By: Thomas Nelson (2012)

Synopsis: Everyone gets the Mark. It gives all the benefits of citizenship. Yet if getting the Mark is such a good thing, then why does it feel so wrong?
Set in a future North America that is struggling to recover after famine and global war, “Swipe” follows the lives of three kids caught in the middle of a conflict they didn’t even know existed. United under a charismatic leader, every citizen of the American Union is required to get the Mark on their 13th birthday in order to gain the benefits of citizenship.
The Mark is a tattoo that must be swiped by special scanners for everything from employment to transportation to shopping. It’s almost Logan Langly’s 13th birthday and he knows he should be excited about getting the Mark, but he hasn’t been able to shake the feeling he’s being watched. Not since his sister went to get her Mark five years ago . . . and never came back.
When Logan and his friends discover the truth behind the Mark, will they ever be able to go back to being normal teenagers? (Taken from Goodreads)

Review:

This book was amazing! I loved, loved, loved it. It was captivating and very suspenseful, not to mention the author has an incredible writing ability. There were numerous words that even I didn’t fully understand, and they flowed naturally in the story. A lot of books try this, but they never come off well—either the big words come off condescending, or like the author purposely put them in there to make it sound “better.” In Swipe, every word flowed, fit with the story, and made the story better.

The characters were, plainly put, awesome. They were realistic and lovable and easy to connect to. There were a lot of characters, but the way it was written made it easy to keep track of them all. Another truly amazing aspect is how every single character tied into the story in an important way. You start the story, meet all these random characters, and wonder how in the world they’re all connected, then it all comes together in the end. Not to say I didn’t see some of the reveals coming, but it was still done really well.

Despite the numerous characters, each one has their own personality and is their own person, truly developed and written in for a reason. I did not see one random background character that swoops in and out without contributing; every single character contributed, someway, to the plotline, and every character was very well done.

On the downside, it was a bit confusing. I had trouble understanding certain scenes or what was happening. I can’t say for sure it was the writing or storyline itself, because this was a very detailed story, so I could have just gotten distracted and lost track of what was happening. But I will say that some of the dialogue was just so choppy—as well were a couple scenes—and in the beginning I had a hard time making sense of things. However, my confusion never lasted for long and it did all make sense in the end. It was just a smidge confusing in the beginning.

The other downside I have is the random ‘girl problems’, as Logan puts it, that seems to be going on behind everything: Logan trying to figure out who he likes and who likes him. Oh, Hailey likes me. Hmm, but I think I like Erin. Does she like me?—that sort of stuff. Okay, so I guess that I get it, that Hailey only wanted his attention because she was the spy. And I suppose that the stuff between Erin and Logan, well that’s realistic and understandable at that age. So I do understand the reason behind it, mostly, and I appreciate it that there is actually a reason. But for me, in the context of the story it just seemed completely out of place. I’m glad the author didn’t take it any further, though I am curious to know if there’s going to be future stuff between Erin and Logan;)

Overall:

As a whole however this was a spectacular read. Vivid, suspenseful and full of fun, this is one book you don’t want to miss: a unique dystopia in a world of stereotypes.

Negative Content:

None.

Rating: 5.0

Recommended to: All teens everywhere!

Lost in the Sun by Lisa Graff

Lost in the Sun by Lisa Graff

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Title: Lost in the Sun

Author: Lisa Graff

Published By: Philomel Books (2015)

Synopsis: Everyone says that middle school is awful, but Trent knows nothing could be worse than the year he had in fifth grade, when a freak accident on Cedar Lake left one kid dead, and Trent with a brain full of terrible thoughts he can’t get rid of. Trent’s pretty positive the entire disaster was his fault, so for him middle school feels like a fresh start, a chance to prove to everyone that he’s not the horrible screw-up they seem to think he is. 
If only Trent could make that fresh start happen.
It isn’t until Trent gets caught up in the whirlwind that is Fallon Little—the girl with the mysterious scar across her face—that things begin to change. Because fresh starts aren’t always easy. Even in baseball, when a fly ball gets lost in the sun, you have to remember to shift your position to find it. (Taken from Goodreads)

Review: (Spoilers)

This book was awful. Horrid. Terrible. Okay, I take some of that back. The story was actually amazing. But for me an ending can ruin a story and that’s exactly what happened: the ending of this book completely ruined the entire story. First of all, you can’t just spend the whole book embellishing on Fallon Little and her mysterious scar, then never tell us what happened. What’s even worse is when the author finishes the book—seriously, it was the very last scene—with Fallon sitting down to tell us her story. The narrator, our main character Trent, writes, “And she told me the beginning of her story.” Then bam. The book is over. No more. Turn the page, search for an epilogue—nothing. I understand what the author was trying to accomplish with this, but you can’t just build that much suspense and never tell what actually happened. It was very irritating.

If the book hadn’t ended that way, I would write more about the amazing storyline of the book and how realistic the characters are portrayed and how shocking and incredible it was for me to realize that this was, in a way, a spin-off to Umbrella Summer. And to be honest, I still liked everything up until the end. It truly was a beautiful book and a wonderful new work from Lisa Graff. To me, though, the ending just ruined it all. It built up suspense, teased me with partial answers and more questions, and then never tells me the actual answer. On that same note, Trent really never fixes things with his dad. And I get it—the whole point of the story is just his finding his fresh start. But it would have been nice to see a bit more of it, instead of just his life leading up to the fresh start.

Overall

I just didn’t like it.

Rating: 2.5

Recommended to: If you’re a fan of Lisa Graff, you probably will like this book.

Beyond the Laughing Sky by Michelle Cuevas

Beyond the Laughing Sky by Michelle Cuevas

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Title: Beyond the Laughing Sky

Author: Michelle Cuevas

Published By: Dial Books (2014)

Synopsis: Ten-year-old Nashville doesn’t feel like he belongs with his family, in his town, or even in this world. He was hatched from an egg his father found on the sidewalk and has grown into something not quite boy and not quite bird. Despite the support of his loving parents and his adoring sister, Junebug, Nashville wishes more than anything that he could join his fellow birds up in the sky. After all, what’s the point of being part bird if you can’t even touch the clouds?

With an ear for language and a gift for storytelling, Michelle Cuevas will remind fans of Stuart Little and Where the Mountain Meets the Moon that anything is possible. Even flying. (Taken from Goodreads)

Review:

This book was simple. Simple plotline, simple set, simple characters. Usually when I rate a book two stars it means I disliked it, but in this case, there just simply wasn’t enough that I did like. I didn’t hate it, but there was nothing I really liked either.

The story looked interesting—about a boy who is part-bird and is trying to learn to fly. There were some nice morals of being different and such, but for me, it was too cliche and predictable to feel real.

This book was very abrupt; there’s really no other word to describe it. There was no real storyline, but rather a bunch of random chapters illustrating random parts of Nashville’s life. Each chapter jumped to a whole different scene and set unrelated to the last; it didn’t really flow at all. Towards the end it was better, but not till the very end. This book was very, very short, too. I read it in one sitting and it maybe took forty minutes.

So, to sum it up, there was nothing I directly disliked. I just didn’t like it at all. I found it poorly written and dull at times. It was a cute story, but nothing beyond a cute story.

Negative Content:

None.

Rating: 2.0

Recommended to: Not recommended.

The Adoration of Jenna Fox by Mary E. Pearson

The Adoration of Jenna Fox by Mary E. Pearson

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Title: The Adoration of Jenna Fox 

Author: Mary E. Pearson

Published By: Henry Holt and Co. (2008)

Synopsis: Who is Jenna Fox? Seventeen-year-old Jenna has been told that is her name. She has just awoken from a coma, they tell her, and she is still recovering from a terrible accident in which she was involved a year ago. But what happened before that? Jenna doesn’t remember her life. Or does she? And are the memories really hers? (Taken from Goodreads)

 

 

 

Review:

This is one of those few books that was borderline amazing / too strange. I didn’t know whether to rate it four stars or two.

Let’s start with the positives:

The writing was good—mysterious, compelling, intriguing…enough revealed every so often to be satisfying, but enough not revealed to keep you wondering. The futuristic sci-fi element was well done, very realistic. The characters were all very, very, very well painted. Jenna’s character was so realistic; other people may complain she sounded too flat, but I think for a person in her situation, it was perfect. Her memories are…just wow, the way they played out; and touching, too.

So, I’ve mentioned amazing writing, a compelling storyline, and awesome characters. Why, then, did I give it such a low rating?

Here’s the thing.

There were swear words, to start, and quite a few of them. Normally I can’t read anything like this, but I kept going on this one for mainly one reason, which is the second thing.

Throughout the whole book we see glimpses of a Christian life: Jenna’s memory of baptism; her going and working at a church. There is one scene of Jenna, standing in the church, wondering about things like forgiveness and fresh starts. There was so much about it, in fact, that I kept reading past the questionable words and other small things: I thought to myself that possibly it would turn into a Christian-based book and the cursing was only to element her life beforehand, or something like that anyway. Long story short, it fell completely flat. The book even ends with a baptism, but still nothing of starting new or anything. It doesn’t disregard it… but rather, it seemed to be that that aspect was put in there not for a reason, but just to add to the storyline, and I did not appreciate that.

Third, adding onto my previous one, there was very creepy elements of spiritual things or whatever it’s called. “Hell” is mentioned more than once and Jenna says things like “I wonder if I have a soul.” One part of the story is the concept of storing people in computer backups, in other words artificially keeping people’s minds alive in a computer, which I thought was plain out strange.

Fourth, there were questionable characters that did questionable things. There are some very borderline love scenes between Jenna and her apparent boyfriend. And overall the story’s ending and reveal of everything was just creepy.

Overall: It was tied together well, but the few issues I had were enough to weird me out. Two stars may seem like I didn’t like it, but on Goodreads two stars simply means “it was okay” — and that’s exactly all I have to say about it: It was an okay read. Good idea, good plotline, too much strange.

Negative Content:

Mentioned above.

Rating: 2.0

Recommended to: Not recommended.

Graceful by Wendy Mass

Graceful by Wendy Mass

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Title: Graceful (Willow Falls, #5)

Author: Wendy Mass

Published By: Scholastic Press (2015)

Synopsis:

Angelina D’Angelo has left town to see the world. It’s now Grace’s turn to use her magic to protect the people of Willow Falls, and she is up to the challenge. This is her destiny, after all. But destiny is a funny thing—it doesn’t always behave the way you’d expect it to.

Mysterious postcards from Angelina begin showing up in the mail, Grace’s parents are freaking out with worry, and something BIG is coming to town that will affect everybody who lives there. But all Grace is powerful enough to do is turn leftover meat loaf into pizza.

Fortunately, she’s not alone. She has Team Grace on her side! Amanda, Leo, Rory, Tara, David, and Connor know a thing or two about magic and how it works. But none of them are prepared for what’s coming, and none of them know how to stop it. Life in Willow Falls is about to change forever. (Taken from Goodreads)

Review:

Remind me again why I decided to read this book? Maybe because I had nothing else to read.

Simply put, it was a silly book. (Unrelated to the story, but seriously, who dedicates their book to their fictional characters???)

First of all, let’s address the love and romance. THESE CHARACTERS ARE THIRTEEN YEARS OLD. Are you trying to encourage relationships that young? There is no 13-year-old in the world who acts like that. Are there 13-year-olds who say they have a boyfriend or girlfriend? Sure. But that’s besides the point. There is simply no 13-year-old who acts like this. I mean, seriously? Things like “My heart does kinda ache” “I’ll stand by her to the end” “I just want her to be happy”  Are you kidding? Unrealistic romance that would never be seen from 13-year-olds!

If the end of the book came and I found out Amanda and Leo and the others are sixteen, the book would make a lot more sense. Never mind, I take that back, because all the characters act and speak no more maturely than a fourth or fifth grader. There is no noticeable age difference between Grace and the others, despite the fact there’s three years between them. If anything, Grace acts older!

Anyway, back to the point, it was ridiculous. And over-the-top. Unintentionally over the top. The love was supposed to look natural—not a chance.

Secondly. Most of the story made absolutely no sense whatsoever. Oh, they’re going here now—wait, why? She has powers—wait, didn’t she just say she didn’t have powers yet? Who’s that character again? Wait, how is that exactly important to the story? Here, Grace is going to go unfreeze time—waaaait a second, wasn’t the whole last scene written to help Grace figure out how to unfreeze time because she didn’t know how? And I don’t recall her learning how to!!
Lots of scenarios like these made it very hard to keep track of things. Everything was just so confusing! Maybe if I’d devoted every ounce of my attention to this book, I would know. Unfortunately, this wasn’t interesting enough to be worthy of every ounce of my attention.

On the positive side (there isn’t much), the plot was action-filled. It was interesting enough for me to keep reading, if anything. The author did do a good job of tying in everything and everyone and connecting it all to the magic. I did like the way each character got their own sections and you could see a bit into their minds, even it was mostly Grace.

Overall: There isn’t really much else to say except for more things I didn’t like, so I’ll end it here. I suppose that if you like unrealistic romance (did I mention every single character besides Grace and Bailey are involved in some sort of relationship?!) then you will like this book, but otherwise…don’t waste your time.

Negative Content:

None.

Rating: 2.0

Recommended to: Not recommended.

The People of Sparks by Jeanne DuPrau

The People of Sparks by Jeanne DuPrau

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Title: The People of Sparks (Book of Ember, #2)

Author: Jeanne DuPrau

Published By: Yearling (2004)

Synopsis: When Lina and Doon lead their people up from the underground city of Ember, they discover a surface world of color and life. The people of a small village called Sparks agree to help the Emberites, but the villagers have never had to share their world before. Soon differences between the two groups escalate, and it’s up to Lina and Doon to find a way to avoid war. (Taken from Goodreads)

 

 

 

Review:

In this imaginative, adventure-filled sequel to The City of Ember, the people of Ember have just found the way out. They find themselves in the city of Sparks, where the people are doubtful of their story. As they start to adjust, strange things start happening and tensions rise between the two. Will it be enough to destroy both civilizations? Or will they overcome it?

This book was fast-paced, well built, and intriguing. There wasn’t a definite plot, but rather lots of things going on at once. There were a ton of characters, but rather than feeling overwhelming, it felt more realistic, because in this situation, there would be that many people. Due to the fact this was a more plot-driven book, all the characters were developed to the same level, so there was no true relatability to any of the characters. However, in the case of Sparks, that wasn’t necessarily a bad thing.

A dystopian society without the feeling of a dystopia, the author truly captured her story without the cliche feeling of every other dystopian novel. The themes were very strong, obvious, and well written. I enjoyed reading such a novel, a dystopian yet with so many positive themes built in. That kind of thing is super hard to find!

Overall:

If you liked The City of Ember and were looking forward to the sequel, you won’t be disappointed. It’s a bit slow in the beginning, but once you get past that, it’s everything I expected in an Ember sequel.

Negative Content:

None.

Rating: 4.0

Recommended to: Fans of A City of Ember!