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The Limit by Kristen Landon

The Limit by Kristen Landon

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Title: The Limit

Author: Kristen Landon

Published By: Aladdin (2010)

Synopsis: An eighth grade girl was taken today . . . With this first sentence, readers are immediately thrust into a fast-paced thriller that doesn’t let up for a moment.

In a world not too far removed from our own, kids are being taken away to special workhouses if their families exceed the monthly debt limit imposed by the government. Thirteen-year-old Matt briefly wonders if he might be next, but quickly dismisses the thought. After all, his parents are financially responsible, unlike the parents of those other kids. As long as his parents remain within their limit, the government will be satisfied and leave them alone. But all it takes is one fatal visit to the store to push Matt’s family over their limit—and to change his reality forever. (Taken from Goodreads)

Review:

This book was very well done. Plotted and described in a way that reminded me of The Girl Who Could Fly, The Limit is set in a futuristic world where families who cannot keep under their debt “limit” are forced to send their children off to workhouses to work the debt  off. Our main character, Matt, has never truly worried about the limit; his family manages money well—or so he believes. When his family suddenly finds themselves over the limit one fateful day, Matt finds himself being sent off to one of the workhouses without so much as a goodbye. He dreads it and just knows it’s going to be torture, and fears he will never get out once he arrives.

It had a pretty good plotline; at any rate, it was interesting enough to keep me reading. The writing was acceptable, with longer sentences and better word choices. The descriptions were decent, and Matt was a good main character, working for the sake of his family and friends rather than for himself. His love for his sisters was well expressed, as well, and yet he still felt like a realistic teenage boy.

*MINOR SPOILER BELOW*

However, there were aspects of the plot I found very unbelievable and fell a bit flat. For example, in one scene, Matt decides to run away. And despite all the security the author has gone into detail explaining over and over how strong it is, Matt still defies the odds and gets away. And not even that. He makes it all the way back to the city—walking, even though it took two hours to drive there—and even gets back to his house. I thought the security was super tight? I thought the people in charge were super smart? How was it even possible Matt made it that far?

And then, when he gets back to his house, he walks in, sees his little sister and says, “Hi, Abbie,” before going upstairs. No tiredness? No fatigue? No emotional aspect of “I can’t believe I’m home”? Nope. Then he goes to his mom and she barely notices he’s there, only is worried about money and new businesses. And then Matt blows up at her for not being careful enough with money, careless enough that he and his little sister were both taken. (That part, at least, was understandable.)

Then, of course, there’s a knock and it’s the security. Finally. On top of it all, he willingly goes back to the school. This was the one part of the story that didn’t make any sense whatsoever. Seriously—I know the security is going to come after him and make him come back, but first of all, they wouldn’t catch him the next morning. It would be minutes later, from the way the security is described in the book. Secondly, he wouldn’t go all the way out there just to tell his parents Lauren was sick, then willingly go back! The impression that came off as a result was the school was some kind of place one could easily leave at any time and then come back, when it was supposedly the other way around.

* SPOILERS OVER *

The one other thing was: while the workhouses before he arrives are described as some kind of horror place, once he gets there it seems more like a fun school. He’s supposedly there to do “work” that will help pay off his family’s debt, but I’m still in the dark on exactly what this “work” was. All that’s said was that he worked all day at a computer at online school classes, then created intricate new designs for popular companies. If this were any other genre, I’d say that it seems incredibly unrealistic that they’d make the “work” for thirteen-year-olds  creating new hit designs and animations for companies, but then again, this IS a dystopia where teens seem to be very experienced with computers. I do wish there had been more detail on the work, though. The only impression I got was that it was fun. As well, despite the word “workhouse”, scenes where the characters openly admit they’d like to live there forever are constant. Even Matt wonders if he’d like to stay there and never go home. After all, it seems to him like a perfect paradise.

Negative Content:

None.

Overall:

Other than those few things, though, the book was very well done and I enjoyed it. Like I’ve said, it reminded me much of The Girl Who Could Fly, and that put a positive spin on my reading. Though it definitely isn’t the best book out there, this dystopian story was a fast-paced, intriguing, and a somewhat well-written read. I wouldn’t consider it a favorite, but I’ll probably be re-reading it sometime in the future.

Rating: 4.0 / 5.0

Recommended to: Anyone looking for a clean dystopian.

 

Bite-Sized Magic by Kathryn Littlewood

Bite-Sized Magic by Kathryn Littlewood

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Title: Bite-Sized Magic (The Bliss Bakery, #3)

Author: Kathryn Littlewood

Published By: Katherine Tegen Books (2014)

Synopsis: Rose won back her family’s magical Cookery Booke in an international baking competition in A Dash of Magic, the second novel in the series. Rose is now world famous—so famous, in fact, that Mr. Butter, head of the Mostess Corporation, has kidnapped her so that she can develop new-and-improved magical recipes for his company’s snack cakes. With the magically enhanced Dinkies and Moony Pies, Mr. Butter plans to take over the world.

Together with her brothers, their talking cat and mouse, and an unlikely team of bakers, Rose must overthrow Mr. Butter before he destroys civilization, one magically evil snack cake at a time. (Taken from Goodreads.)

Review: 

Bite-Sized Magic by Kathryn Littlewood was one thing—ridiculous. The storyline sounded good: Rosemary Bliss, now a famous baker who uses her family’s magic book to create magical treats, is kidnapped and forced to use magic to create evil treats for the wicked Mr. Butter.

The story didn’t live up to my expectations at all. It was unrealistic, pathetic, and unrealistic. I couldn’t connect with any of the characters. However, the lack of good story left me laughing and wishing for more. So if nothing else, I got a great laugh out of this one! To prove my point: On page 79, Rose has just been kidnapped and is being held hostage. Instead of worrying about escape, she’s worrying about something more important—“ ‘Oh no,’ Rose moaned, staring at her clothes. ‘I don’t have any pajamas.’ ”

It was more of a story than an actual book. The story was awful, the characters were unrelatable, and the plot made no sense, so I found it hilarious. I would recommend it to anyone looking for a good laugh.

Negative Content:

None.

Rating: 

I have no idea how to rate a book that I found so bad it was funny, and thereof a book I enjoyed.

 

 

The Other Side of the Island by Allegra Goodman

The Other Side of the Island by Allegra Goodman

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Title: The Other Side of the Island

Author: Allegra Goodman

Published By: Razorbill (2008)

Synopsis: 

Honor and her parents have been reassigned to live on Island 365 in the Tranquil Sea. Life is peaceful there, the color of the sky is regulated by Earth Mother, a corporation that controls New Weather, and it almost never rains. Everyone fits into their rightful and predictable place. . . .

Except Honor. She doesn’t fit in, but then she meets Helix, a boy with a big heart and a keen sense for the world around them. Slowly, Honor and Helix begin to uncover a terrible truth about life on the Island: Sooner or later, those who are unpredictable disappear . . . and they don’t ever come back. (Taken from Goodreads.)

Review:

Wow! This book was amazing amazing amazing! I’ve read many a dystopian in my life, but this one is way up there with some of the best ones I’ve ever read. I read it in almost one sitting. It was so captivating and interesting!

Honor and her parents live on an island under the watch of Earth Mother and her many rules, but Honor’s family doesn’t follow most of those rules. They have an illegal second child, stay out past curfew, and even Honor’s name, in which the H is silent, doesn’t seem appropriate anymore. Honor and their second child—her brother Quintilian—worry about their parents. Because in this world, if you don’t follow Earth Mother’s rules, you disappear, and don’t come back.

I love, love, loved this book. Great writing, great characters, and a great realistic feel! Even though Honor starts as a ten-year-old and finishes as a fourteen-year-old, she stayed true to her character and everything pulled together fabulously.

Adventurous, mysterious, suspenseful, and clean…every so often I reread this book, and it never fails to remain one of my favorite books of all time.

Negative Content/Notes:

No negative content. However, there were some “religious” themes that had me knotted up for a while. Characters in the book worship “Earth Mother,” they pray to her and there is a version of the Lord’s Prayer they say to her. Honor’s parents, however, tell her that is not the answer, and that there is more to life than what she has been taught. While some could view this as some sort of message against Christianity, my final verdict is that I don’t see that at all. You could also say, after all, that Honor’s parents’ search for the Forecaster might represent going against the religious culture to follow Jesus. At the end of the day I just don’t think the author meant to send any sort of theme like that at all–based on the tone of the story I think it was only there to create an interesting story. I just thought it was worth noting.

Rating: 5.0 / 5.0

Recommended to: Highly, highly recommended to probably ages 10 & up!

Imperfect by Tina Chan

Imperfect by Tina Chan

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Title: Imperfect

Author: Tina Chan

Published By: CreateSpace (2013)

Synopsis:

Kristi lives in a Perfect world, where everyone is genetically made to be Perfect. Except Kristi. Without the specifications, she is looked upon as an Accident—clumsy, imperfect, wrong. She has never met another Accident in her life, because all in except her case, the government takes the Accidents away from society. Where they go, nobody knows. Then Kristi’s parents are arrested for being spies and she discovers another Accident, Chelsa—then things really start happening.

 

 

Review:

 I had a great impression of Imperfect when I first saw it, but it did not live up to my expectations. There were a lot of things I disliked about this book, and at the same time, a lot of things I liked. Truthfully, I would have liked this a lot better had it not been for the ending. I am personally not a fan of cliffhangers. Some cliffhangers are done well, but in this case, it left me feeling unsatisfied.

What I liked: The dystopian element was well-developed, complete down the last detail, and was very believable. The beginning of the book hooked my attention, even if it was dragged out later on. I really enjoyed the author’s suspense writing; a mystery would be mentioned, and then pages later, it would come back and unravel. In a couple of these cases, it was so prolonged that I did wonder if the mystery would even be unraveled, but it always was. The writing itself was another thing I liked. It was definitely aimed for an older audience, and not by topic, but by wording and sentences, and I appreciated that. Some people may not like the fact that there was barely any romance in this book, but believe it or not, that was an element I was very happy about. Though some romance inevitably sneaks in, it is only there in the background and never makes its way to center stage.

Downsides: I could easily tell this was a self-published book by the typos. Which of course doesn’t diminish the quality of a book on its own, but it can create a very unprofessional feel which can translate to a negative view of the story itself. There were quite a few questionable words that I found myself skipping over, though I will credit the author that eighty percent of the time, it was mostly just written, “They cursed,” rather than actually say what they said. I did see one or two actual swear words, but they were framed as part of the dialogue/sentence and, though I definitely believe the author could’ve done something else instead just as well, they were not just thrown in there for the fun of it.

The characters were likeable, but not lovable. I did not appreciate the lack of emotion and the jumping from scene to scene. In one scene, Kristi is in a burning building trying to escape, and it seems that she is not even panicking. Once she gets out, she says, “Phew,” and goes to find somewhere to sleep, as if it had not even happened. There seems to be no aftermath to anything, and when replaying it later, there is no emotion or terror at the memory. This happened over and over at every action. Also, the action kept jumping from place to place. I really would have loved some more connection with the characters.

Negative Content/Notes:

A few curse words.

Overall:

Overall, though, it was a good read. I made my way through it, and liked (some of) it while it lasted. From reading it I can guess most teens will LOVE Imperfect; but me…well, I guess I’m just not a normal teen. 😉

Rating: 3.5 / 5.0

Recommended to: Ages 12+

 

The Shadowed Onyx by Nicole O’Dell

The Shadowed Onyx by Nicole O’Dell

 

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Title: The Shadowed Onyx (Diamond Estates, #3)

Author: Nicole O’Dell

Published By: Barbour Books (2012)

Synopsis:

Join dejected seventeen-year-old Joy Christianson on her journey to hope and healing as she leaves a dark world behind and moves into Diamond Estates, a home for troubled teens. This brand-new novel for teen girls will not only entertain, but also promises to capture your heart and challenge your faith. (Taken from Goodreads.)

Review:

This book, of all the Diamond Estates, is my favorite; it was written so beautifully, painfully, amazingly. One thing I can say about this book is it is definitely written party for an outreach; no one, after reading this, will ever be tempted to get into witchcraft. Nicole O’Dell portrays the whole ordeal in perfect matter; she writes fiction with such a real, haunting feel to it. On a different note, I love, love, loved the Christian outreach written in as well, the themes that eventually save our main character from destruction. I wanted to just cheer for Joy in her moment of revelation!

One thing I love about Nicole O’Dell’s books is, while they deal with deep and mature content, they always stay appropriate and non-violent. I loved all of her books, but this one was just written incredulously and made me sad, mad, and happy all at the same time: sad for Joy and her loss of her best friend; mad at Joy for her decision to turn to witchcraft; and happy that this is not my world, nor any of my friends or families’ worlds.

Negative Content/Notes:

Joy, our main character, gets involved in witchcraft, which is explained in detail, but not in the wrong light.

Overall:

I would recommend reading this series in order, with this being the third book, but realistically, it doesn’t truly matter. This book was simply amazing: harsh with reality, gentle with truth, and overall such strong Christian themes that you can’t—and shouldn’t—ignore. I would give this book 10 stars if I could.

Rating: 5.0 / 5.0

Recommended to: Teen girls 13+

Courage for Beginners by Karen Harrington

Courage for Beginners by Karen Harrington

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Title: Courage for Beginners

Author: Karen Harrington

Published By: Little, Brown Books for Young Readers (2014)

Synopsis:

Twelve-year-old Mysti Murphy wishes she were a character in a book. If her life were fictional, she’d magically know how to deal with the fact that her best friend, Anibal Gomez, has abandoned her in favor of being a “hipster.” She’d be able to take care of everyone when her dad has to spend time in the hospital. And she’d certainly be able to change her family’s secret.

Seventh grade is not turning out the way Mysti had planned. With the help of a hot-air balloon, her new friend Rama Khan, and a bright orange coat, can she find the courage to change? (Taken from Goodreads.)

Review:

 I think most people will enjoy this sweet story; there isn’t anything necessarily wrong about it. Just for me, I was looking for something better, a story where something actually happens. While it’s not my type of story, I think most people will enjoy it thoroughly.

In reality, Courage for Beginners is not a story about a girl who makes something happen; it is about a girl who gains the courage to decide to make something happen. And while I get the concept of the story, I didn’t particularly enjoy it.

There was nothing I directly disliked about this book, but on the same note, there was nothing I really loved, either. To me, the story was boring; absolutely nothing changed throughout the course of the book. The main character, Mysti, starts her story with her dad in the hospital, her mom being agoraphobic, and her best friend ignoring her. The story ends with her dad in the hospital, her mom agoraphobic, and her best friend ignoring her. Just… disappointing.  True, Mysti has decided to do something about it by the time you reach the last page. She has decided to change her story. But before we can find out how exactly she will do so, the book ends.

For good points: I have to love Karen Harrington’s creativity at 1) giving her character a name like Mysti, and 2) making Mysti a person who thinks she is legimately a character in a book (ha, ha) because that is exactly what she is. Mysti herself was lovable and determined. Her friend Rama was well portrayed of the role of an encouraging friend. I admired Mysti’s determination to help her family. Overall I did understand the whole story idea, that she is working to gain the courage to change her story; I just would have enjoyed it a bit more if there would have been included a section where she actually went through with it.

Negative Content/Notes:

None.

Overall:

I feel bad giving this book such a bad review when it really isn’t a bad book, but I truly just did not enjoy it. 2.5 stars.

Rating: 2.5 / 5.0

Recommended to: Wouldn’t recommend. Ages 8+